That was... AWESOME!

Will you add a new chapter? or will you abandon it (heavens! please no!)

Can you write a sequel since it's complete? THAT would settle my thoughts. The end of the chapter, fueled up my imagination and the plot bunnies.

I was finding a story like this! When, in the end, Asch accepts Luke! In the first chapter, I was like "I wonder what's going to happen?"

When I'm done, I can't stop reading it! It's so wonderful!

Though, sometimes your choice of words are kinda confusing... BUT! DOn't worry, I still understood the story. But, it was missing something... something that starts with the letter S and ends with an L that spells: "Sequel"

LOL! I'm sorry if I'm pushing you for writing a sequel! I just love it! One of the best, I read.

I LOLed at the idea of Jade and Anise's kids!

Anyway, nice story! I'm looking forward for a sequel or another new chapter (That I really hope AND wish you will write and post it.)

Is this completed already or would you continue it? either way is fine because this story is so cool!

Wow, this was very fun to read. I was amazed that it didn't have 100 reviews already. _ I liked the explanation about Lorelei's 'siblings', and the pacts. It made it very interesting. Asch and Luke's relationship is really sweet, and I loved how you ended it. _ I'd like to read any other Tales of the Abyss stories you write next! XD