I really like this story, but wouldn't Jocelyn be freaked out by airplanes and cars? I would love to read more of this.

I really like this story. I love the fact that Josef is the one with a kid. In a lot of the stories in this section, you see that Mick is the one who is either having a baby with Beth or something like that. I really like the fact that Josef is a father!

Great Job! Update ASAP!

I really like Jocelyn and Josef is soo sweet around her. I can't wait to see what happens. I wonder what that guy said that upset Josef so much? I really liked this chapter. I liked how you described as how it seemed like Josef had found part of himself. that was good. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Alanna

Awesome chapter. Update soon!

yeah u updated :D i love ur story very interesting but i love josef so thats y i lvoe ur story so update soon again

I can't get anything right. Daughter! Works for me.

Ah, wife, or sister or mother or cousin or...

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Love it! Please Update ASAP!

I love where you're going with this story. Please update soon!

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love the story update soon please can't wait to read what will happen

Awesome story! I love it! Keep writing! Update Soon Please!

As Always... Take What Ye Can... Give Nothin' Back!

VAMPIRE SOLIDARITY, RAH RAH RAH! (and all that!)

Mrs. Capt. Jack Sparrows

Wow You really have a knack for these kinds of beginnings. I am so totally hooked and on the edge of my seat waiting for more. PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Alanna

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