This is so funny! I love it :D

Haha. Let me just say, I almost hit my head when I read your end author notes. My chair almost flipped over, which would've made me hit my head on the glass cabinet next to me because I was laughing at 'Near's perfect pet'.

I could totally see them just staring at each other, and if someone would ask Near, he wouldn't respond, then that person would just walk away slowly...

I like your story very well, allthough I normally don't read anything below rated T or M.

Since I am German (I want to excuse myself if my English is bad) I can tell you "Herr Roger, würden Sie mir bitte die Gebäcke geben" is nearly correct, only one thin: In Germany you wouldn't use pastries or "Gebäck" in plural but only in singular, so the correct sentence would have been: "herr Roger, würden Sie mir bitte das Gebäck geben (or: reichen)"

But it was very near to the perfect form.

Aw, this is so cute! X3

Matty... I feel sorry for him e.e; in the anime he has GREEN HAIR. Le gasp. Horrible, right? Anyway. He was so cute in this.

Mello's actually LIKABLE! Lmao.

And Near's... He's just weird and funny. XD

L surely is the one who deserves the "Weirdest" award. Or something. He needs an award, at any rate... He's like a father figure or GOD to them... No wonder Mello hates Kira XD Kira thinks he's God!

That was the most original, well thought out fanfiction I've ever read. Congrats. =D

As I'm sure you've gathered from my various reviews, I loved this "little tale". I loved their personalities, I loved how you explained the events, and above all, I love your writing.

Thank you so much for writing this! I hope my reviews expressed how much I loved this =D!!

Even though I think ate most of my one for the third chapter ._.;

You can probably just guess I loved that one as well XDD

If theres anything I think you should improve upon, it's mostly just watching how you phrase things, and making sure your using the right word in all situations. To be a bit more specific, perhaps you could work on sometimes using other words besides "said", as there are a lot of them.

After this, I definitely need to read the rest of your work later. Although the "M" rating on some of them scares me a bit o.o;

I have to say, out of all of the chapters, I laughed the hardest in this one. It seems like so many funny things happened! I love how you transitioned from one scene to the next so swiftly.

Aw...I can't believe I'm almost done with this. I don't think I've reviewed anything this much in the past three years XD

*gigglesnort*

Tea party antics are always the best. I love L's little outbursts.

Hahahaha. Mello is such a brat...It's making me so happy.

Damn you! I can't help but review every single chapter >

Since my last rant was so long, I'll try to make this one a bit shorter...

The thing that I noticed about this chapter that I loved the most was your ability to have the characters do things one normally couldn't picture them doing, and still make it believable. I'm actually a bit jealous of that...It's an amazing ability, and I really admire it.

However, do be careful with everything you have them do. When you reread your writing, make sure it actually sounds like it's staying true to the characters. There were some points, mostly with Near and Mello, that you had them doing things I couldn't exactly picture...

Anyway! Loved it! Onto the next chapter!

Oh my goodness I LOVE it so far! It's cute, it's funny, and it's quite well written. There were definitely a few parts where I laughed out loud, and plenty of parts that made me smile.

What a good set up! I can completely see all of this happening, especially because of how proper and gentlemanly Roger seems to be. I love how you distributed speech and actions evenly, as in all the comical fanfics I've read its mostly just speech...A nice change, indeed.

I can't wait to get past the first chapter, usually I don't like reviewing anything 'till I'm done with it, but there were a few little things about this chapter that I think you should take a bit of note of.

First, when your using "fancy" speech, be real careful about making it sound too bulky. A lot of the time when we think about fancy folk talking, we think of a lot of complicated words that normal people would never use...But I thought sometimes you had a few extra of those words that didn't need to be there. You need to make sure all of their sentences are complex as well as elegant.

Also, (and this is just me being picky), there were times when you used the same adjective in one paragraph, which always bugs me..."he was still munching his usual chocolate bar and carrying himself with the air of one who thought he was terribly wonderful. His very looks screamed of a terrible lack of manners." I LOVED this part of it (That description of Mello was PERFECT), but the use of the word terrible more than once made it seem bulky.

Then there were just little things like not adding commas before names, which I'm not even sure is necessary. So not much else...

Anyway, my rantings aside, this is such a great little story. Thank you so much for writing it, I can't wait to keep reading

Love it :) Wonderful and hilarious...great work ^^

It's got to be saying something with my sister, who is almost eighteen (and the older one) and still throwing tantrums. Shame.

:D I love your fic! It had me laughing all the way through, especially the bratty Mello moments and L's pink suit.

This story was wonderful. Amazing, brilliant, hilarious, and perfect for someone who has not had the greatest day. I found myself laughing so often (I'm sure my parents didn't appreciate it, considering it's after midnight) and just wa soverall amused (and I will admit, when 'April' got to dance with matty I squealed, considering my name is April).

I love Matt and mello so much I can't even describe it. I don't particularly LIKE Near, but I don't hate him, so yay. I love Whammys...just...this was great. Excellent job