 sakura li 19 2008-08-09 . chapter 1I really like this. Although it is only the preface, the mystery and different perspectives put an aura of sadness and foreshadowing. I don't know if you meant for it to be that way, but I really liked the style.
If there are three different stories based around the same basic plot, you can either blend the stories together or give us a distinct place where one story starts and where it ends.
I can't wait for your update, so update soon please! (Don't let it pressure you, take your time! ^-^) Good luck~! |