brilliantly written, still... I hate Victoria. But after reading this I feel for her, I mean she has lost James.

Wow
that was really good...interesting..enlightening
Never used to think abt victoria's thoughts.
Great story

O-M-G

This story was well written, I think you managed to get what Victoria was feeling the whole time after James died perfectly.

This is an awesome awesome story! So did Bella die? u should so write more!!

I thought that was great. You really added a lot to the fight scenes.

Wow, really good fic. I loved it. Victoria's POV is so interesting.

This story is fantastic! I've never read Victoria's PoV represented quite as well as this =) I doubt Stephanie Meyer could have done a better job.

even though victoria is a freaky, murdering, sadistic **-you kind of have to pity her.

Fantastic. Utterly fantastic!

Great job. I can't wait to see more works by you!

- Niamh

Excellent! A wonderfully well written alternate point of view of this scene.

Once again, brilliant. I loved it. And I really loved your take on the end of a vampire - how Victoria continued to see all the way to the flaming end.

This is freaky! I love how u show her special power, and it is so freaky how everything is battling within her head. She terrifies me, and it is just a little bit eerie how well you enter her personality. I also love the way she sees Bella and Edward's relationship, and the confusion over the ware wolves. An all around wonderful chapter, and a very fulfilling end to the story. Drama and ferocity. Fantastic job!

This story was absolutely amazing! You stayed very true to the books and I feel like we get a whole new version of the story and it makes me love all of the Cullens even more!! Keep up the good work!!

I like it!