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WL 10/13/10 . chapter 6
PLESE COME BACK AND WRITE MORE. THIS IS A GREAT START TO A GOOD IDOJ STORY. THEY DON'T HAVE MANY LIKE THIS!
Kentauros 10/19/09 . chapter 5
I'm enjoying this a lot! You're a good storyteller, so I hope you come back to it soon :)
whitlighterleo 10/2/09 . chapter 4
This chapter was great. I hope you update soon cause the story is really picking up and I would like to read more as soon as your done. Keep up the good work.
Danja 2/7/09 . chapter 3
The uniform she wore in the reunion movies was actually silver, not gold:

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Otherwise, great story! :)
Ms.Wings 2/3/09 . chapter 1
More soon please! This is shaping up to be a great adventure!
DivaNikki 1/30/09 . chapter 3
Very well written! I enjoyed those 3 chapters immensely. I love to stop writing my jeannie stories and read some one else's for a change! Please upload more chapters soon. I'm in suspense here ; ]
ClassicTvFan 1/29/09 . chapter 3
so far so good...please update it as soon as you can.

:)
choconat 6/29/08 . chapter 2
hi!

really good second chapter. im really looking forward to thr rest of the story! keep writing!

choconat
Kentauros 6/22/08 . chapter 1
Hi Ameera! :)

Nice to see you back to writing in IDoJ-land, too.

Your story has a good start and look forward to more. You have a couple of good mysteries set up and it makes me wonder where you may go with this.

I liked the bit about a "tracking site" as I used something similar in the Genie in a Lamp story (which I am currently revising.)
Danja 6/22/08 . chapter 1
Ameera!

Long Time, No See! :(

Great start, good to have you back! :)
choconat 6/20/08 . chapter 1
hi there!

very interesting story- i cant wait for the next chapter!

perhaps a little more romance between jeanie and tony? sorry, im a tony/jeannie fan. )

choconat
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