LOL
Why does an encest always catches my atention?
Anyways nice story it's a nice couple(even though it's an encest couple XD)

aww so kawaii!! they make such a cute couple! sequel please!! ja ne!~ PLEASE~ UPDATE! ASAP~!

OMFG! *blushes* You made me addicted to this pairing! Please write a continuation to this fic (one with a Mature rating, pretty please? *begs*) You can't leave us hanging like this! ;-P Light/Sayu forever! Keep up the great work!

Okay, hands up. I clicked on this cause I like kink and saw that this was incest... and I was impressed. Well and truly. You write so well and you didn't need to use a lot of description to continue the flow of the story... unlike me. I overuse it sometimes.

Anyways.

Much as I am a Misa/Sayu shipper and not one of Light's biggest fans I still very much loved reading this... and I could honestly say I shared Light's frustration when him and Sayu were interrupted by Sochiro. I so badly wanted their embrace to continue.

You also get major props for mixing an actual chapter into the story. Made it more believable and workable.

Ten out of ten. Stunning one-shot thar. -peace sign-

That was so perfect!
and they never had to meet again under the same citcumstances for she has been kidnapped not long after.
I absolutely love it.
It would be fabulous if you add more of them because you got one more addict to this taboo pairing.

-dies-
OMG I would totally ship this if it weren't for incest and how wrong it was.
But, argh, you wrote this extremely well.

Oh God, I LOVE what you did with this. It was just... perfect. And using a chapter from the actual manga made it even more realistic to me XD

You officially rule and are amazing and deserve some kind of award. Seriously.

INCREDIBLE.

I shall leave before I start abusing caps.

This is full of win. You made my day.

Wow. That was incredible. THANK YOU SO MUCH!! I'm waiting for more!
You have no idea how hard it is to find a decent story with this pairing! Arigato! XD

~Saya

one great story with a light & sayu paring. good work

YAY! I love how wonderfully delicious you make this taboo pairing. Honestly, you are one of the only authors that can really pull them off. I tip my hat to you!

It was good. Thanks for giving such a pleasure from reading ^^
You described Light really well, if the situation took place I`m sure it would be something like that.
And, ah those interruptions >.

Hm... I don't know what to think! I'm totally open to almost all kinds of fanfic, and having written an incest fic once long ago myself (and twincest at that!), so it's not like I didn't like the whole LightxSayu thing. I've never seen it done before, so new things are always pretty cool to me. However, this story does have its flaws. The main one is the random Fangirl Japanese. It's unnecessary and I don't even know what some of it means. I guess I'm just really used to hearing Inuyasha-themed Japanese... Anyway, that part annoyed me. Other then that, it's pretty good. Could use a little more flesh in the paragraphs, and I don't mean get them naked. I mean like, more emotions, more descriptions, etc. Otherwise, towards the end, it got really good, with the whole unfortunate interruption ('cuz honestly, who hasn't been there!) and Light just being a freak. The part where he says, "Or do you just enjoy making out with your brother?" sent shivers up MY spine as well! Ick, nothing like being blunt about things... Goodness. Anyway, well, my review is long enough, and I just had to put in my two cents since on your profile you made a big deal about your LightxSayu craze. Interesting stuff, so keep writing and you'll get better!

I'm reviewing again because this story gives me little flutters in my stomach when I read it.

*pant* Work something out?! Work what out! I need to know, you torturous woman!

Yes,

thar better be moar, or ** I'LL KILL YOU ;O.

this is so delicious.

Too delicious.