Wow, at first I was pretty confused, then it hit me. And I have to say, Eriala, that I absolutely adore this story. It's exactly how I would picture Max if this was incorporated into the story, but in aspects I don't want it to be in the story, because it's perfect the way it is. Does that make sense?

My favorite thing about this was JoJo, because when I think of JoJo, I think of a wonderful friend: one who doesn't judge or betray, who's there for you even if you aren't a hundred percent. And it also helps that Max and JoJo are my favorite characters. ;)
I can't wait to read more of your stories, Eriala!

New fan,
Nora.

You are an amazing writer. You captured Max's attitude perfectly, and then you made it seem as if I was actually there observing them, and I could visualize every single detail.

You're just... I can't even think of a word, you're so good.

I'd totally appreciate it if you would read one of my stories and see if you can help me and again I'll say, be as good as you.

P.S. You're one of the best writers on this site. And I have read a lot of stuff, btw.

Yet another heartwrenching, lovely piece by a wonderful, wonderful author.

There were simply too many things in this fic that I liked for me to point out all of them.

And may I say that you write every Across the Universe character SO in character, it's insane. Did you have some discussions with the cast or something? xD.

Anyway, that definitely put me close to tears and what a great job!

Much love
~KT

You did a wonderful job with the characterizations, especially with someone like Jojo, who is hardly in the movie at all. I loved the descriptions and Max's overall attitude.

Well done

I liked the "mommy" comment, it was veyr funny, and made me laugh over and over again!