Aww

aww! thats so cute! i loved ur story! lol i laughed at the part where u said jasper and alice fought over paint colors xD

aww i feel so happy for Emmett!

Ohhhh i see some foreshadowing in this chapter!

I loved this story

Love it !

you should write a sequel about how they have kids and e/b kids fall in love with either j/a or e/r and you should also do the weddings nice story though so sweet

Another great story :) I still like the Six Months story the best lol...But I have more to go YEAH! Very well written and I like the plot...lol so different! Thanks for making Jake a dog hehehe...and I still like how James was the bad guy!

My English is not very good I hope you understand me.

I have read your story and I liked it, congratulations.

This is such a cute story! Lol to the Jake thing.

so cute, great job on the story, loved it!

Best part;

Suddenly the door barged open and collided with my head. I cursed and clasped the now bruised skin.

“It wasn’t me!” Emmett declared with his hands up.

“You’re the only person who walked in!” I called, sitting down.

“Well maybe it was a ghost.” He shrugged and got me some ice.

Loved the date, loved the first kiss

Jasper is so adorable!

So is Jake, I want a puppy like him and an Edward in nothing but a towel, too. *drool*

Aw sweet story. Even Jake got his Nessie in the end.