 Owl Emporium 2008-09-30 . chapter 1Ahh, the belt. Although I'm very anti-belt (or any kind of that dicipline, really) I loved this. Haha, but yes, he deserved a good...smack? xD Grandpa was probably rolling in his grave. Laughing. Very much. xD Anyways, GREAT JOB! :D Haha. (:
Angelica |
 Dreams Of Naughtiness 2008-07-21 . chapter 1sweet story! i'm glad you decided to do these characters, they have lots of spanky potential |
 WonderfallsOnDaisies 2008-06-24 . chapter 1I loved the last line. Perfect story. |
 Falconyx of the Black rocks 2008-06-23 . chapter 1GREAT! |
 spankingfemfatale 2008-06-23 . chapter 1Very sweet hun! (Wish the spanking was longer) Heh :PHope to see more fics from you in the near future! |
 southrngrl16 2008-06-23 . chapter 1ok i know this was a one shot but... it'd be awesome of you went into him telling mutt some stuff he'd done.. I just have to say you are an exceptional writer! i love your work |
 gibbsheroic27 2008-06-22 . chapter 1loved it! I think a story about one of indy's whippings would be incredible! |
 crzysheelf 2008-06-22 . chapter 1Enjoyed this a lot. Really nice. Gotta love when the Jones Boys go at it! :) |
 supergirl3684 2008-06-21 . chapter 1oh! oh! oh! *raises hand and waves it in the air trying to get yoru attention* i want to know what he did!! |
 dumbblonde76 2008-06-21 . chapter 1great one-shot! |
 wandamarie 2008-06-21 . chapter 1great chapter and new story keep up the good work how is class comming along thank you |
 pokerfacejones 2008-06-21 . chapter 1that was cute. ;p |
 Rislanderinks 2008-06-21 . chapter 1Very good! I like the compromise they reached. One thing I'm not sure of, though . . .
. . . Indy shook his head. “If I’m being a jerk or you think I’m not listening to you, son,” he told him, sincerely, “then just belt me in the mouth to get my attention. . . ."
While I can see Indy saying that, I'm not so sure that'd really be tolerated--either by Indy or Marion. Back then the husband/father still ruled the house and made the decisions (well, for the most part). Dad was the final say in most matters. I think he'd expect respect from Mutt--not quite as rigid as Henry, Sr., with Indy calling him "sir," but not an all-out brawl. IMO--that is! ;)
This was particularly good:
. . . Indy nodded. “You got it, Junior,” he told him, smiling. “I certainly never wanted to be like my father and I sure as hell don’t want you to be like me. I’ve made too many mistakes over the years, son. I don’t want you repeatin’ any of them.” . . .
I think these two Alpha males will knock heads for a long time, but perhaps Indy learned a thing or two (what not to do?) from his dad.
Good one shot (or three quick shots to the seat, that is!)--a quick glimpse into an afternoon with the Joneses! ;)
I'm so enjoying your stories and look forward to your updates!
--laura |
 kokomocalifornia 2008-06-21 . chapter 1Great work! |
 pdantzler2 2008-06-21 . chapter 1This was a great one-shot. I've been enjoying your writing very much these last few weeks. I don't know how you find the time to update so much, but keeping the chapters short and frequent is nice because I feel like you've updated everyday.
Keep writing! |