You just have to continue this story!

Otherwise I'm forced to hunt you down :3

Please?

no no no ..dont' make duo a bastard! but how about making heero begging to love duo .. hehehhe ... you dont' see many fics where heero is on his knees while duo hesitating as "not want to injure his partner as he is sick" ..? that is the right kind of bastard, right? but not the bad one right? hjeheheh

Very nice. You showed a side of their relationship that is hard to express at times. And with not that many words. You get much kudos.

Val

Really interesting, and I think that it would be awesome if you turned this fic into a multi-chapter fic! Write more soon!

So cute! I like the amount of detail you put in not to much with the car and such but enough to realy conect with Heero

i vote more not the best place to stop by any means

Please tell me that you're continuing this, you can't just stop it there! That would be mean, does Heero make it? Is he still alive?

What's Duo feeling in all this?

That was really sweet! It could stay a one shot just fine. Though it would be nice to see what Duo would do next. It's a romantic story really liked it.

Omg! You can't leave it there! Please write more! Pwease! I'm begging here!