Reviews for Flawless Distraction

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l0Ri lAWlCAKES 2008-10-05 ch 1,	abuseThat was amazing:3. Just wow. Loved it
Mariel Nightstalker 2008-09-03 ch 1,	abusesquee! i have personally been fascinated with raito's figure, legs especially, and finding a fic devoted to that aspect of him was like finding a hidden stash of chocolate. you are on my list of peope who have Made Me Very Happy. will there be a sequel detailing the behavior in the closet or will you leave it the way it is? Abby~
Booji 2008-08-22 ch 1,	abuseDamn, I love closet!sex. Oh well, closet make-out is good too :)
Gaarastwin 2008-08-15 ch 1,	abuseI loved it as i love most of your storys though to be honest... I REALLY WANTED CLOSET LEMON!
Niomi-Sensei 2008-08-13 ch 1,	abuseCloset-lemon sounds interesting...
Ekoaleko 2008-08-11 ch 1,	abuseDude...L being obsessed with a rip in Light's pants, dragging him into a closet, taking off Light's pants, and sewing them up equals THE BEST BEST PLOTLINE EVER. XD LMFAOO. I especially loved L's line: "We sleep in the same bed. I have plenty of chains and handcuffs available. If I wanted to molest you, I would’ve done so with more than my eyes already.”
Twin Fox Tails 2008-08-11 ch 1,	abuseAwesome setting! Loved how you kept both of them in character. I love your stories! Keep it up.
The Devils Concubine 2008-08-09 ch 1,	abuseno! why would you stop it here, things were going so well!
RootLess 2008-08-03 ch 1,	abuseArwl... that's actually the way I like it: Curiosity, Challenge ... That was sexy. I love it!
Kelayoh 2008-08-01 ch 1,	abuseHeehee! This was one of the most delightful things I've read in a while. It was very well written, in character, and super funny to boot! I just love your L characterization... his thorough calcluated analysis of his attraction to Light's thigh was absolutely spot-on, and just plain ol' adorable! :D Also, the line “Gee, that rapist has an awfully striking moustache” made me snicker and grin rather foolishly at my laptop monitor. Hahaha. I actually quite like the fact that you left the lemon to the imagination, as well. All in all, I loved it... Thanks for sharing! Gonna go straight to my favorites. :)
Shivaka Kyrupteran S.K 2008-07-27 ch 1,	abuse/giggles violently/ Oh yee god! /sputters/ I-I...you...BAHA! /chokes before falling over/ I've split my sides before, but this over the beyond! You have officialy cracked my ribbs and made me get scarecrow stitches, SekushiAi! /laughs in a nearbye corner/ I never thought I see (read) the day of L being distracted by Lights LEGS!! /rolls around the ground while dragging the computer by mouse/ I'm conteplating about puting you on my favorite authors list-- I've read many of your stories! /squeels girlishly and bites thum/ And its decided that you will! P.s: Okay - so maby once. Twice, possibly.../giggles some more/ ~S.K
Yami-no-Hikari-7 2008-07-24 ch 1,	abuseHaha! XD That was awesome! Go Light! Way to get the ball rolling! lolz.
ILoveMyGeeWay 2008-07-14 ch 1,	abuseI liked it, but i would love a closet lemon! That would please me! Right now it is good though, but the lemon would make it perfect. I loved the part where L said he had plenty of chains and hand cuffs! That makes me want to read a bondage yaoi of them! lol I really liked the story XD
Whittle Kin 2008-07-13 ch 1,	abuseLiterally a flawless distraction. To L. Just think of that rip a little bit somewhere else, and God, L would rape Light without second thoughts. x) So, to sum this review up, I'd say this: befitting title. Couldn't name it anything else but that. Flawless skin as a distraction, a fool-proof distraction; You name it, it's that title.
Mimay 2008-07-12 ch 1,	abuseThe summary got me hoked in, however I didn't think they'd go that far. I'm glad you left it as it is because it's good as it is. xD Ah Light so vain

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