Aww...(sniffles) this story's way too touching. It sort of makes me want to cry. Great job, pal.
Jordan

Sad and tragic. I sure hope you'll snap out of it soon. Oh, and you spelled the words correctly.

Wow. Part 6 really is shocking. I'm very sorry about Nazo's death.
I'm really curious about the next part. Keep writing.

Poor Sonic and Ari.
I thought Seth was the Demon of Darkness, not Zathura.
Cont' this story. It's so cool!

Wow! Nazo's on the good side in this story. I can't believe Seth wants to kidnap Ariana.
Keep up the good work.

This is really good, so far. Can't wait for the next part.