Reviews for To Home I Have Returned

Reviews For: To Home I Have Returned

rolletti 2008-08-07 ch 1,	abuseGreat companion piece from the father's POV. I really like to read what the parents overhear and how they try to wrap their minds around the overheard experiences their childen where involved in. Thanks, Rolletti
Window2MySoul 2008-06-28 ch 1,	abusewow. that was some powerful stuff. it was written so well. i have a weird feeling now. but it's a good weird feeling. if that makes any sense. k. ya. shutting up. great job though. amazing story.
Kaoru-Hime 2008-06-24 ch 1,	abuseReviewing..again =D It was a lot like the first fic, still "very good" as always. I wonder if they really had those nightmares? Anyway, I really like your writing.
Elennare 2008-06-22 ch 1,	abuseAnother brilliant story, just as good as This isn't Home. The changes Mr Pevensie sees are well thought out. I love your description of Susan. "a painted face, a hollow laugh." just six words, but they paint a perfect picture of her. Poor Peter and Ed with the nightmares. I suppose they would have more, because they were the ones to always ride to battle, though I always pictured Lucy as being very involved in the figthing too - she was the Valiant Queen, after all! Still, people do react in different ways - maybe Lucy, who I see as a very optimistic and happy person, would have dreamt more abut the good things in Narnia. I like how their parents come to accept the idea of Narnia, even when they don't understand it. And your prose is, as before, beautiful. Cheers, Elennare
Miss Pookamonga 2008-06-21 ch 1,	abuseAnother phenomenal job. I love how you refrenced to Susan in LB with her having a "painted face". And I like the different subjects of Pete's and Ed's nightmares--very in-character. Plus, I love how they comfort each other as if their father isn't needed to do that for them anymore--shows that they are still the kings inside even though they don't look it. Great job :) Luv, Miss Pookamonga ;-P
hpswst101 2008-06-21 ch 1,	abuseI feel sorry for the dad. Not understanding what's going on with his sons. Thanks for posting, it was great. hpswst101
Fire Dolphin 2008-06-21 ch 1,	abusei always wanted to read a story like this. where some how the parents would become aware of whaat their children had suffer if you know of other sotries like this, can u tell me?
Mercury Gray 2008-06-21 ch 1,	abuseAw, I'm so happy you decided to write this! And I'm glad you thought my idea was good enough to follow up with! This is good, but not necessarily as good as the first one. Dads are always harder to write than moms, because not all dads can fit as easily into a cookie-cutter perception of them as moms do. There's something about the tone of this that doesn't quite match what I think of Mr. Pevensie, but then, it's so hard to really capture the essence of a man who's been through war. So good job anyway, for taking an idea that wasn't your own and running with it. Props to you, and good job!
Fantasy's Magic 2008-06-21 ch 1,	abuseI really enjoyed this one too :) Great job on writing them!
elecktrum 2008-06-21 ch 1,	abuseI enjoyed both this and its companion piece. Astonishing though the truth must be, I can see Mr. and Mrs. Pevensie accepting the story of Narnia and Aslan. The profound changes in the children would be proof enough of something remarkable happening to them, though my heart ached at the description of Susan.

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