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| All Tears Must Fall. 2008-09-22 ch 2,  | abuseIt's kind of hard to read 'cause all the text has gone into groups of 2 lines (which probably isn't your fault). You also start a lot of your sentences with 'I' which gets a bit boring after a while ya know..? Maybe you could possibly re-edit your 2 chapters so it's not so boring to read. Your idea and stuff is really good though just needs some tweakering. 8-D -All Tears Must Fall |
| Greene Finch 2008-09-21 ch 2, | abuseUpdate... |
| bloody-vampire-bite 2008-08-16 ch 1, | abuseAw. ferard till the end girly. |
| xxmeghan 2008-08-13 ch 2, | abuseomgsh! great story haha. please post and update soon :]] |
| Brellabelle 2008-08-13 ch 2, | abuseWhat the hell... Your format's off. Begin a new paragraph when a new person talks; if you don't it gets too hard to figure out who's talking. Other than that small fault, it's great! |
| Kaz-za-15 2008-08-05 ch 2, | abuseAww! Your stories so adorable. :P Plz continue. |
| xThey.Stare.Us.Downx 2008-08-04 ch 1, | abuseAw that was cute! please continue! |
| Depressed Mizuki 2008-07-31 ch 1, | abuseThis story is not in the proper section. It needs to be placed on FICTIONPRESS dot COM, not FANFICTION dot NET. Please remove this story and place it on the proper site. If you do not, I will have to report you for abuse of the site policy. Forgive me for my brusque manner, but there are far too many ill-placed stories in this particular category already and I'm getting VERY tired of having to report each and every single one of them. I would greatly appreciate it if you would move it to the proper place so that I won't have to expend energy that I could be spending reading and writing legitimate fanfiction pieces reporting you to the site authorities. Sincerely yours, Mizuki Kurenaida |
| Iggy's Lovely Mistress 2008-07-28 ch 2, | abuseI like it so far! Update soon! :) |
| HeatherLujah 2008-07-23 ch 2, | abuseThat 'Jock'[In Scotland We Say 'Ned' Scotland Its Wierd Saying 'Jock' A 'Jock' Is What The English Call Us > |
| xmcrloverx 2008-07-09 ch 2, | abuseaw, this is such a cute story so far! please continue =) i've decided that since you are sweet enough to review every chapter of my story (and i'll end this direst), that i'm going to follow yours! and i really like it so far, so please keep going! |
| xxx Never gonna get me xxx 2008-06-23 ch 2, | abusethat was rlirli gd chapter! luved it! |
| xxx Never gonna get me xxx 2008-06-22 ch 1, | abuseits rli gd!! cant wait 2 read more if u do write it! |