AH! This is the BEST story I've read in DAYS! And I get on here everyday, twice a day, so that is saying something. I have never even thought of a Ziva/Jimmy pairing, but you actually made it work! Jimmy was heroic and caring and just AMAZING! Who would have thought? Also, a big thumbs up for the first few chapters with Tony's dialogue. It was really witty. I can't wait to read more from you!

Interesting ending!!

I liked it.

To be continued! How I hate those three little words when I'm enjoying something. Gr. Now I'll have to put you on alert.

Yay another Jimmy story for this challenge! Love it.

Glad Jimmy's ok.

Glad he's willing to go out on a limb again.

He will prove himself to Ziva.
I know it!

Good chapter.

I think Ziva's going to have some apologizing to do after Palmer's actions. That crazy boy. He totally deserves a medal for all this. Can't wait til tomorrow.

~Thalia013 ;)

So far, so good! But my only problem is that Ziva seems a bit out of character. She's never that whiney and critical, nor would she wish harm on one of her colleagues just because they lacked the training and skills that she has. She seems a little too harsh to be completely believeable as Ziva.

But other than that small beef, I'm enjoying this quite a lot! It's nice to see well written stories around here. And sofar, not a single hint of "TIVA". *sighs with blessed relief* ;)

Jimmy got shot?

ARGHHGHG

More please and soon!

I just got a chance to read this story. I like how you're portraying Jimmy - not any real experience and not a field agent, but figuring it out as he goes.

Could Palmer have gotten himself into anymore trouble? I mean really, they're getting ready to take him out of the freaking country for crying out loud. If he's planning on staying where he can get help he'd better be able to put all the stuff the Director told him into action. Additionally, I feel Gibbs really got the short end on this whole thing. He was right, Jenny was the one that chose to use a non-agent on this op, but Gibbs is catching all the crap for Palmer getting grabbed. And why didn't McGee open fire on the car? Although, you could argue that it would have been better to send Tony around back as opposed to McGee, but still. Anyways, great chapter. Until tomorrow.

~Thalia013 ;)

Good story so far.

I am really into it.

Base and Ball, cute. I just hope Palmer doesn't get too rattled to carry this off.

exciting! and why is the baby called Ike?

I'm hooked. This is already so good I just can't wait for the next chapter. This is a very intriguing idea and I can't wait to see how everything plays out. Putting Palmer in the field like that is a serious risk and I really hope Ziva can get them through this. See ya tomorrow.

~Thalia013 ;)

GOOD START

Can't wait for the next chapter.