  Anonymous 2008-07-13 . chapter 1 Hey. I was reading your profile and I've read all your stories. I think you're a great writer. So, first - the reviews...
An Epiphany: It's very well-written and your writing style makes it believeable. But, even with your error-free story, I still found it a little difficult to believe, just because it's hard to picture Ron as so intuitive. Overall, I think it's a nicely detailed oneshot.
Post-Match Euphoria: It's cute and funny. Not perfect character roles, but pretty damn good. The expression "fully grown mountain-troll dance the Nutcracker in full costume" is just so Ron. I just think that Harry and Ginny would try to be more private. But I love their jokes and their boldness. Good job!
Ever After: Amazing! Because Rowling's books give so little information on the Harry/Ginny relationship, it's hard for authors to write something that readers can actually believe. You do an amazing job of fitting the characters perfectly. There are a few grammar errors and some of the sentences could be fixed up a little, but I think this is the best Harry/Ginny story I have read so far...and I've read quite a few. You use little details from the books that just make it seem like it's a continuation of the series.
Your profile is hilarious. "wanna know my cup size? (i kid, i kid)" haha... dirty jokes are great to lighten the mood. It's really cool that you can speak so many languages. And I agree with your cooking skills: Ramen is the farthest I can go with cooking. LOL. I've always wanted to go to Vancouver...sounds amazing...although I'm not really into any sports - yes, even hockey. i love the canadian anthem...and we have similar music interests...u should listen to American Boy by estelle...sorry if it seems like i'm hitting on u - i'm not...no, really |
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