Splendid... when do you plan to write about their raid... it'll be fun!

you made me cry. i got so emotional, this is beautiful writing and you described the characters very well. but wouldn't jeb have been there? i still love it though- you pretty much get it, since i cried. :)

"She'll be beautiful. She's Wanderer," I said reassuringly.

Ian looked up at me once more, a burning love reflected in his eyes. He whispered softly, but the fierceness in his tone cut through the room.

"She's Wanderer. She is beautiful."

thats my favorite quote. 3

Love this. Thanks fer makin me smile.D

awwwwwwww, so sweet. Ya know along with ALL the twilight couples (ExB, RxEm, EsxC, AxJ, NxJa, Wanda and Ian have gotta be my favourite fiction couple ever. this was great, loved it, well done xxxxxxx

awww :) thats really good!

i especially looooove the end!

This was very beautifully written. It was very sweet and emotional and I really enjoyed it, even though this part is now covered by the bonus chapter. Some nitpicking: I think Wanda did dream as a bear - the difference was that human dreams were much more vivid, if I remember correctly. Also, I would expect some reunion between Mel & Jamie. But these are not important - the overall feel of this story was wonderful! Great job!

love, love, lu-v the last line. Ian is to cute! ;)

AWH, that was so beautiful

i frkin love Ian so damn much.

call me over-dramatically emotional But the last line had my eyes stinging with tears, and like a burst of happiness go through all of me. 3 wish there was more TheHost fanfiction, though most of my time is already busyy with twilight ff. XD ofcourse.

-love SaraCullen!

ps; did i say your awesome?

I. LOVE. IT! YOU AWESOME AUTHOR, ONE OF MY FAVES NOW! YOUR FIC ONE OF MY FAVES! YOU ARE AWESOME!

P.D: SHORT REVIEW CAUSE I HAVE TO GO TO SLEEP!

Aw, that was such an awesome one-shot. Seriously, great job! I love Ian's final line. Kudos!

loved it

aww! cuteness and fluffness! i loved the last few lines and you really got melanie and ian's personatiles right . it was great. would you conisder doing ian pov of when wanda wakes up ? anyway well done ! it was great! i love the exclamtion key right now :) becasue it allows me to show you how good this was !

Oh! This was so sweet!

I loved this!

The way they all agreed...So nice.

I can't get enough Host fanfic, I love the story. I like this one, it was very well written.

Omg! I Love Ian! ooh... such a sweet man!