 Dingbat142001 2009-05-19 . chapter 1Hahaha, terribly sneaky of you. I admit, you have me stumped for a brief moment there ;) |
 Lady Skywalker13 2008-08-15 . chapter 1This was so adorable! I love dyou never actually said his name, like it really is all a secret. |
 AmeMizu 2008-08-01 . chapter 1Super CUTE! I loved it! |
 LunaML 2008-07-12 . chapter 1The conceit was rather predictable but still very well pulled off.
~Luna |
 Countess Verona Dracula 2008-07-07 . chapter 1Wow, that was really quite good. The minimalism of the detail and dialogue really worked for the overall effect - one of sadness and isolation. As much as I love all of the fluffy Tony/Pepper stories I've been reading, it's more realistic to expect them to have a hard time connecting emotionally, and this ficlet captures that. Bravo!
~ Verona |
 Amber-Jade James 2008-06-23 . chapter 1Very good storie!
love the idea of them meeting in secret!
Cheers
AJ |
 alliesings 2008-06-22 . chapter 1Quite hot! I love the way he plays with her, teasing her about the boss. Looks like they have a great relationship in both worlds. |
 tamasit1 2008-06-22 . chapter 1Loved it! |
 kitty2399 2008-06-21 . chapter 1Holy crap!
This was so good! It was surprising at the end to learn that it was him!
This was such a well done piece, I was all upset that she wasn't with Tony, but then at the end I flipped out! This was very impressive writing, and did I mention hot? lol!
Great job, keep up the good work!
Kitty2399 |