it was a bit disturbing... but interesting anyway

damn, this story is really good. i wish you would write more, and i mean make a chapter story for this! i mean you could have it so the sequal would include new soldiers such as hiei and yusuke, maybe a little jealousy from them both. of course kurama would be high ranking by then ne? i beg of you!

*claps* That was good, funny and bazarre. But good! stil where do yo get your ideas O.o

Great fanfiction! I think you should make more! Love it! Update!

Well, that was interesting. I'm not sure if it counts as fanfiction-obviously you've taken your influences, but you've changed everything so much I wouldn't call it a fanfic. Not that that's a bad thing, of course not. My one problem is that I don't find your version of Marron very likeable, and therefore don't want Kurama to wind up with him.