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kirallie 2008-08-13 . chapter 3
Poor TOm!
SweetRevengeful-aka-lamika 2008-08-03 . chapter 3
Written very well.
Made me laugh and wince at Tom's torture.
I will be sticking around for future chapters~!!
Gamine Madcap 2008-07-20 . chapter 3
Heheheh...this is great. Absolutely, completely great. I'm a Southerner myself, so I have a special appreciation for Tom Sawyer. And really, the timeline for the books and movie kinda works--Twain published a couple of books about Tom Sawyer in the mid 1890s (Tom Sawyer Abroad and Tom Sawyer, Detective) so it could be reasoned that if the publish dates are close to when they were meant to take place, then Tom could have been in his early 20s working for the Secret Service in 1899. Of course, there's a lot of creative leeway there...but that's what we do in the world of literature, right? Anywho, keep up the great work and update soon!
XPeculiarityX 2008-07-16 . chapter 3
This is brilliant so far. Please continue. ^^
Sawyer Fan 2008-07-14 . chapter 3
LMBO! Oh boy! Aunt Polly and the League! Mrs. Harker be warned!

But please, Aunt Polly, don't cut Tom's hair! Don't cut off those darling curls!

Enjoyed this chapter, and could understand Tom's unwillingness to 'take his medicine'. That stuff back then was nasty!

Look forward to reading more! Its definitely going to get interesting!
achillies-eel 2008-07-12 . chapter 3
Oh man, Tom's going to throw a right fit when he finds out. So very very glad you updated this! A perfect thing to come home to after a tiring day. I'm really too lazy to sign in right now, so I'll just do his 'annonymously' :P. update again soon!
DocRock06 2008-07-11 . chapter 3
WOW! This was an amazing chapter...I have to say that I feel sorry for Tom at the start of the chapter.

I can't wait for more :D :D :D

DocRock06
devilburns 2008-07-11 . chapter 3
oh no poor tom!!...aunt polly is coming alone, i feel sorry for him.

more soon please
redjegger 2008-07-09 . chapter 2
aww poor Tom. he's really in for it.
achillies-eel 2008-07-05 . chapter 2
I just finished watching the movie, and I am now a total and complete fan of anything LXG. Must write more, must write more! -shoots at you with matilda-

Really, though; there aren't enough good ones of these. You gotta write more for me, alright mate? :D Cheers.
kdawg 2008-06-27 . chapter 2
Please update this is really good!
Sawyer Fan 2008-06-26 . chapter 2
LMBO! Poor Tom having to suffer through Aunt Polly's doctoring!

Enjoyed that, plus the detail you had in the story. Good insights into how Tom would feel in college.

Excellent chapter!
DocRock06 2008-06-26 . chapter 2
Wow! This is a really great story! I love the interaction between Tom and Aunt Polly. I can't wait for more and I hope that you update soon!

DocRock06
devilburns 2008-06-26 . chapter 2
^_^ another brilliant chapter
wisdominart 2008-06-26 . chapter 2
It's just getting better and better!
I hope you go into more details on Aunt Polly's doctoring.
Oh, southern hospitality. ;)
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