This is an amazing story. I really can’t fault it. Okay, sure, I never read the Archie comics, so I am a bit out of the loop concerning the character pairings, but I feel that the only thing I lost was background fluff. The main players in the story were either instantly recognisable, or done in enough detail to make me feel as though I actually did know them. And I do like how the main event of the story actually turns Junior away from a life of crime (to be fair, having your own plans used against you in such a way that they are responsible for injury/ nearly killing someone important to...okay, one of your friends, so by extension you, would put you off evil megalomaniacal schemes. Having it happen on your first attempt would be highly discouraging). Oh, and the Pokemon reference was brilliant.

Aw...a happy ending for everybody :-D Even Junior...er...I mean JULIAN. Haha.

Ayame turned out not to be such a brat after all, hmm?

- Insanity Lord.

Haha. Ayame kicks ass XD She and Junior are friends. Aw...

I don't feel sorry for Nega either. I don't like him much.

- Insanity Lord.

Sonic is getting way too old for this...

Man, Metal Sonic 3.3 is ruthless.

- Insanity Lord.

This is getting really good. The idea for some of the crazy robot rides are amazing (espically Gravitronik). And Metal Sonic's back...I had a feeling that he'd show up, but I always thought it was one of the park's Metal Sonics that would turn evil, not Metal 3 coming back.

Keep up the good work! Interesting that you've created a friendship of sorts between Junior and Ayame, wonder where that's going to go.

darkblur

Ohohohoo...this is getting very, very interesting. I love Gravitronik by the way. Kick ass robot XD

This is going to be very, very good XD

- Insanity Lord.

Oh what a mess! So Ayame may save the day it looks like...but can Sonic survive his worst nightmare I wounder. This continues to be great and I look forward to whatever is next

This is starting to get very, very interesting...hehehe. I can't wait to see what happens next! Will Nega eat his words? Probably! XD

- Insanity Lord.

Great chapter. It's nice to see Sonic got his speed back. And it would seem Junior is coming dangurosly close to makeing a friend, lol. Oh, what evil could Nega is up to?

Oh, I love as good twist and I can honstly say I did not see that coming!

Oh. Things are getting very, very interesting! XD I like this story a lot. Mwahahaha...

- Insanity Lord.

A well placed time jump there. I'm sad to see Chuck go, but alas I suppose it was inevitable. lol, I can't believe they're all going to Eggman Amusments, I don't think I would, free passes or not

So how much time has passed between these two chapters? o_O Ayame is a teenager now?

And Junior...wow, he's...interesting :p

- Insanity Lord.

Such a nice story so far. You are such a good author and I salute you. (Does a salute) All jokes aside, you've created a great world filled with imaginative mobians and people. Keep up the good work!

darkblur

That was an interesting dream she was having...a Chaos induced vision? Or a look into Shadow's nightmares?

Hehe. This is getting good :)

- Insanity Lord.