cutness, fluffyness, awsomeness! *giggles* i loved it! Jalace, Emily- vnever thought of that one- and Bedward *shudders* you do readlise i'll never be able to use that again right? it so... urggh
loved it!

heal my bleeding heart

great story iam mad because a coupel of weeks ago i decided to call alice and jasper jalice you wrot this last year before i knew about twilight =[

very funny

ghod! edward's so so so (faints)

awe

One thing that I had to point out before I moved onto the next chapter...

You said

"She snuggled back against him. “Oh really? Do tell, my lovely finance.”"

I think you mean Fiancée ...

(:

But it's a good story!

Lilmissxx

that wasn't the best, but before you think this is a flame it isnt. i really like it is just not the best

that is so hilarious!! great work on it!

Luv from a Mutt.

JALICE AHAHA. thats funny

HILARIOUS! I laughed out loud several times and I'm pretty sure my mother believes m to be crazy.

:) its cute!

I am lovin' the name Emily, i really am. Really good plot as well.

*Shudder* Not the Jonas brothers. Anything but that. I mean, Zach Efron's better, and that's just ridiculous. When I want to insult someone I use Zach Efron as an example! I hate the Jonas brothers! I wish nothing more than more them to have never existed.

Sorry, but I had to say that, I was revolted that you lowered Alice and Bella to the point where they were admiring Joe Jonas! But um... good story otherwise, very funny.

thats cute... hey! my name is emily!!

I love Bella. and Edward. I want to merry him.