Ohh. *exasperated sigh*

This was beautiful. Seriously.

It couldn't get better than this.

That is what annoyed me about Mitchie too! I mean she lied but she is all forgiven while Tess gets the brunt of all the anger. Seriously. And for the record I don't like Mitchie very much either. She doesn't seem a very believable character.

Sorry for the rant. anyways what I liked about the story was the fact that it show Tess as humane, brings about some closure with her mother and finally pairs together Tess and Jason who I feel make a really good pair. You also detailed Tess's insecurities and emotions very well.

Good job!

wowowow.
amazing.
iloveit :D

I'm usually not a Tess fan, but I am a huge Jason fan. I really enjoyed this fic. I felt bad for Tess, and Jason was awesome. He's such a sweetheart, at least in the fanfiction world, the movie didn't give us authors much to work with. More fun for us right? Anyway, thanks for the read, good work.

that was amazing! :) i love tess and jason together and this story was really wheat i've been looking for. great job!!

Great story! I loved the beginning & ending thing you did. It's like a before and after picture, but with words (if you don't get what I'm saying, it's not your fault, I just have weird thought process >.

wow, that was really really good,

I must say, I truely despise Tess, but you totally made me forget about that while I was reading this. I felt so awful for her, I guess I never considered how suckish her life must have been to make her act like she does... and Jason is just a dear in every way, so that helped of course.

“Uh… I’m not Mitchie. Or Peggy. Or… a girl?” “I’m Jason and…” Jason trails off, looking at the mess of glass on the floor, “you’re not okay.” That was my favorite part! The Jason-ness was completely spot-on.

Excellent! A fave for sure!

This is super adorable. It's the perfect blend of angst and fluff. You're amazing and this is amazing!

Aw!
How cute!
=D

im teary eyed.
that was really beautiful especially the ending.
great job.

wow, that was... amazing. This story is very well written and I hope to read more from you!
~candy

I wish it could have lasted longer. Jason is just so nice in this simple way, the perfect one, to show Tess the way!

This was amazing... I've formed a soft spot for Tess, and seeing her finally deal with her issues is something relly cool. I love your characterizaion of both characters -- they act like the movie versions of themselves, which is good, but you also gave them much more depth. It made for realistic people and emotion, and an amazing plot. I loved it.

aww how cute