The only thing I have to complain about/ note is that this story should be rated T instead of K, since there are some mature/ adult themes in it. Other than that, it's a really good story. Good job :)

cute story :) only suggestion is that you should rate it higher than K (like T) since it has adult themes in it :)

Wow. I love it.

I like it because its pretty light hearted, like you said...but I like how you've made it so that Isshin is using a gigai and Masaki doesn't know about it...because I agree with that theory.

"And only because you look so cool." That was a great way to end the oneshot. You couldn't have ended it better.

I'm adding this to alerts :D

What if you call the series One Last Cigarette? Then if you want to, you can refer to the song :D