Such a sad story. I cried at the park part. Great job on the story

(plays Could It Be) good story and the two finally ended up together

In Not So Suite 16 both of her parents were alive (although they fought a lot) and she had another grandmother from Oregon that truly loved her and didn't seem to care much for brother (not that I blame her) and came all that way just for her. She could have stayed with that grandma.

That was so sad. You know, I don't cry often. In fact, almost never. And yet, this story had me bawling so much that A) I almost got caught awake at this hour and B) I actually had trouble reading it because my vision was blurred way too much. There are a lot of fanfiction writers who have tragic events and things in their stories, but very few of them are ever able to capture the raw emotion behind the reaction to tragedy that makes it believable and makes the reader want to feel that pain and cry it out themselves. Of course, I have friends who will cry at anything, but to me this was certainly one of the best written pieces in terms of actual empathy that I've found in a long time.

That was...Absolutely adorable! It's sad yet happy. Ya know? I loved it.

This is such a beautiful story! It made me cry during that bit in the park, it was so sad. I loved the ending. This was brilliantly written and in character and i really enjoyed reading it.