I love the title! Of the four sections, my favorite was probably Ariana's, though Lily's is a close second. Your Luna didn't seem "Luna" at all to me, though, and I think that of all the characters in HP, shes the most likely to believe in God. Overall though I enjoyed reading this.

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No words are coming, you know. You showed us that there is love, and happiness just before the end, and that we can let go of our problems- if only for a moment- and dance.

Beautiful.

You've /really/ outdone yourself here--this is brilliant. Your descriptions are beautiful, in particular, and I love the figurative language you've used to convey the characters' emotions as well. Each piece was poignant in its own different way, though Bella's stood out the most; of the four, hers was the only that didn't strike me as sad, merely inspiring. Lily's was my favorite, though: your imagery was particularly striking in hers.

Nice job!

I really love this story, it's so beautiful and simple. Really great.

Fray honey, you don't know how wonderful it is to read your writing. Now, if only you'd update Admonition. =]

This was gorgeous - I love how all these women find comfort in the idea of something that they cannot be sure exists, and how well they all seem to link despite the completely different characters. The imagery was just gorgeous as well.

Fabulous. Simply fabulous.

This is really beautiful. I love your descriptions.