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CobwebMirror
2009-10-18 . chapter 1
It was rather good, but if you don't mind, I'd like to point out that your french was incorrect. Jai- or rather j'ai, as is proper- means "I have". I think you were looking for Je: the pronoun "I". Otherwise, the story was rather enjoyable!
xXIkutos-Secret-LoverXx
2009-08-21 . chapter 1
ALUCARD YOU BASTERD!
diamond aka fairy246
2008-06-24 . chapter 1
lol this is great i really like it i hope you do more
Sammich Man
2008-06-23 . chapter 1
That was pretty good, nice an' short, but not too short for a oneshot.
mint leafs
2008-06-22 . chapter 1
is this before or after Pip joins Hellsing?
DarkestVampire
2008-06-22 . chapter 1
Nice PxS-ish story there... althrough Pip`s accent is a bit much sometimes and the ending was... well, a bit sad.
But other than that... not bad at all.
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