Aww, so cute. I liked this one a lot. There were a couple of grammatical mistakes, but I liked how the whole thing progressed. I was fearing an overused "U like me? I luv u!" scenario, and i like how you mixed it up a little bit. I also like how you made it amazingly adorable without... an excessive amount if "action". It makes me feel warm and fuzzy.

In regards to MOTHER3, **, I was bawling my eyes out at the end. I knew it was coming, someone spoiled it a little, but i didn't know how. Now I have to figure out how I'm going to play EB.

Awesome ficcie! I'm so glad I got to read this one :) The best thing with good ficcies is that you never want them to stop, you just want to read forever, because they are that good. And you ficcie is one of them!
I hope you will continue with NessxLucas, since they are my favorite couple on ssbb! Take care!

omg!! that was just the most adorable lucasXNess fanfiction i've EVER read! i just love it! And i played MOTHER 3 and it made me also cried! It would be awesome if you continued to write more stories about this couple! Great job!

I read your fic on Deviantart, and you know? I love it! Is one of the best NxL fics I've ever read! The plot is not simple and you mixed drama, romance, and humor very well, your writing is clear and it's easy to imagine what's happening. Great job :D

Sorry if I wasn't clear, English is not my mother language.

This is just adorable!~♥

...Hmm. Are you Star-Yukiko on DeviantART? x3 Because that's who introduced everybody! :D

And...a shipping name? I have no idea :( I can tell you when I find out though! :D

Super cute! I absolutly love it!

Lovely story! There has to be more NessxLucas in the world!

I LOVE IT! =) NessxLucas is my favorite couple!

From Alex: I thought this was really good! Sure, it's a gay story, but I ain't a homophobic, so I gave it a chance. I'm glad I did! I LOVE the metaphors you used at the beggining! I'm adding this to my favorites! P.S. Good thing I got to this before my brother, because he IS a homophobie and would probably flame this for that.