I really love this story! It's a lot of fun to read and i'll admit, my stomach lurched when I read of poor Joe's assault. Please update soon, I'm really looking forward to the next installment.

I'm glad Joe told his brothers about Jack, but now I want to know what comes next. I am liking this story please post the next chapter soon.

Really good!! ^_^

This looks so intresting! Usually AUs of this magnitude have poor characterzation, but you did really well! Congrats! When's the next chapter?

Wow, I fear for Jack now xD
I hope something big is coming up, that would be perfect :'D
Can't wait for the next chapter~

D: No, poor Joe!

Aww, I wonder how Jet and Albert will react to this little development =O

Nice job, again~

xD I love the brotherly relationship in this. Cute~

I like how you're progressing - not too fast, not too slow.

You could work on your overall writing skills a bit, but none-the-less, this seems like it'll be a new guilty pleasure of mine~
C: Good job.

Wow, poor Joe, Jack is such a jerk. I hope Jet and Albert can take care of Jack befor something really bad happens. Anyway, this was a nice chapter and I can't wait untill you update again.

Thank you thank you thank you! I've been checking for updates for so long now... I thought you had given it up! Great chapter by the way! ;)

Are you proud of yourself? Because you should be. You said that English was not your "mother language" but what I read here was amazingly done for someone who claims they don't speak english well. Yes, there are a couple errors, but they're not very big.

All in all, I think that you should be very proud of yourself and continue on. :)

OMG I love your story! Please update again. I want to know what happens to Joe! :)

Ohh! What an exciting chapter! Ah! I can't believe you temporarily killed Joe! ~sigh~ Poor Joe! What is that guy's deal? I cannot wait until you update! Please update as soon as possible. I have you on my story alert so I'll know if you haven't! ~wagging finger at thunderincrimson with a stern expression on face~ lol ;D

I relly hate Jack for doing this to Joe. Jet and Albert better take care of Jack before Joe ends up dead. Anyway, this was a good chapter and I hope you will update soon.

Update yay Joe Got hurt he's my Fave character and i luv it when my Fave Character gets hurt. I also love him cause unlike many "Heros" his Goth/Emo and not a brash loudmouth.

Listen to How to be Emo on Youtube it's got a great song:

E is for Emontional, ruin everybody's day.

M is for Miserable Ppl.

O is for On the Darkside, were we have fresh Cookies,Cookies Woo