Really good job on this story.

OMG. this is brilliant! have you ever considered making more Marik X Yugi stories? there's barely any and yours is so cute! lolz great job seriously

cute

awwwww its soooooo cute...and the perfect story to end the day(or start if you perfer its almost midnight)with...

nice

Awesome!

Wow you had me thinking it was Yami there for a moment. Good Job. I like this couple,

It was definitely Angst/Romance. But then again isn't Angsty romance just great? With Croshipping none the less. I loved it. Keep up the great work. And did you have to kill Jou? Why not Tea/Anzu?

OMG! Poor Yugi in order to prove himself to Marik he had to kill his best friend. What a relationship... Great Story..

Great story. Poor Yugi to have a love like that. He had to kill his best friend and himself for Marik. Sounds like it will be a painfilled relationship.

O.O Hm... I love it! Though it is not my favorite pairing, as I like the Yamis with their respective Hikaris but I WOULD LOVE to see how this turns out... surprise me .

DarkAnubisAngel

Oh WOW! Ok I was expecting the Marik part, but not Yugi! Holy $#1T! Marik is realy messed up in a way that only marik can be. AWESOME!