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monkeymuse
2009-07-25 . chapter 1
OMG I can not stop laughing here! That was just so CUTE! The horror of John, But that's what Kids are for!
MissMe113
2009-04-28 . chapter 1
Holy...oh, my...I can't...
I CAN'T BREATHE!
LMAO! That was SO FUNNY! Great job!!
~Melissa
jmstevens
2008-12-21 . chapter 1
OMG!! They were using TAMPONS??

No wonder George the clerk was laughing!!

Awesome story!
ToxicLullaby
2008-09-13 . chapter 1
LMFAO! Once it got to 'Milk, Lucky Charms, a chocolate bar, nothing unusual except for the last item. This one made George’s brow rise. “Hey, kid, you sure your mom shouldn’t be the one picking this up?”' I knew what they had bought.

But putting it up the ears, nose, and butt? That's just so freaking hilarious! Mwuahahahaha. Poor John, having to explain that to them.

Is it wrong this kind of reminded me of Jensen's character Pristly in Ten Inch Hero? He can't escape tampons! Haha.

Nicely done. Gave me a great laugh.
sweetysmart0505
2008-09-03 . chapter 1
Tampons! OMG, that was beautiful. 'So you can swim and ride a bike'. Awesomely done!
Innocuous
2008-07-28 . chapter 1
rotflmao! thanks for this. god, tears are still stinging my eyes...too much laughter! thanks!
An Antique Heart
2008-07-26 . chapter 1
AHAHAHA! thats so cute! *wipes eyes* hehehe ah! luved it!
keep it up!-maya
trifletrot
2008-07-02 . chapter 1
Bwahahaha!!
that was the funniest thing i have ever read! so going into the fav section!
PookbearD
2008-07-02 . chapter 1
OMG!, what are you trying to do kill me? I am at work and lucky for me most everyone is gone or else they would have heard me laughing clear to the other end of the hall. Picturing Sammy in the tub with the aforementioned items attached was too priceless a picture not to conjour. I would have loved to hear the conversation with Bobby about this little incident. I bet he would loose it too.

Thanks for the wonderful laugh this afternoon.
twin wonders
2008-06-30 . chapter 1
I have just read your story and can honest to god say that I cried with laughter. It was brilliant! Thank you so much for taking the time to write and post it.I loved the innocence of Dean and little Sam's unwavering trust of his brother. It's going to be one of the things I think about and re-read if I ever need a little cheering up.
sinful delight
2008-06-28 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHAHAH! Can't stop laughing. Pretty sure I just woke up the rest of my house... and possibly the neighbors with my giggle fit. hehehe. Nice work!
rozzy07
2008-06-28 . chapter 1
Oh god I think I peed myself (just a little!) at the ending. The power of the young mind to absorb information totally wrong just left me breathless and yes my guts still hurt so much from trying not to laugh out loud. One of the funniest pieces of writing I've read in a long, long time.
cmac1nj
2008-06-27 . chapter 1
ROFLMAOPIP! Even with knowing how the joke goes, I'm still laughing so hard I'm crying...LOL! This was FAN-FRICKIN-TASTIC!

Peace,
Carmen
A lost lily
2008-06-27 . chapter 1
LMAO perfect. Absolutely perfect and with a slice of small missing Mama Winchester angst too. LOVE IT
helinahandcart
2008-06-27 . chapter 1
Hahahahahah LMAO well done, good one.
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