Hey, Cyn, nice job. I loved this story, and my mom liked it too. She laughed at it. And guess what? I'm writing this from my own computer. I can now review from it. Isn't that awesome? I don't know what went wrong before, but hopefully it's been fixed. Once again, nice job.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

Great story. I laughed so hard.

#4-All of the above! Oh, and Leo's ** shouldn't be so hard to bite!
Haha, funny story!

The Light Of Reason♪

Loved it to pieces! I think Mike needs to get some revenge on Raph next.. ;)

I love Raph's moral. Thank you for sharing!

OMG! hahaha! That was funny! I can see Raph doing something like that. The moral I chose was the third one because I totally agree on that theory. lol.

LOL. That's really cute.
Sheesh, who teaches Raph that kind of language?
...Hey...story idea!
...How about you write a short on that? It would be hilarious! (I'm kind of really busy, so I can't right now.)
If you don't want to, it's okay. But I don't think I will, I've got too much to do.
*ahem* back on track, I think I like Raph's motto the best. :)

Hahahaha, Oh I loved this! Poor Mikey, and although it was mean of Raphael, I agree with the last moral, sometimes it *is* worth the punishment! ^-^

Ha! So Raphael had a chance for a little payback. I'm thinking it might not come even close to evening the score with all of Mikey's practical jokes, but it was a step in the right (wrong!) direction.

Hrm, yeah. "Fukushuu." Makes you wonder where that word derived from...

I love your Turtle tots so much. Cute story!

Brilliant, Cyn, positively brilliant - and funny as heck.

You have such a way with the chibi tales! And though I couldn't tell at first who was who (kind of felt the one needing to apologize was Raph), by about two-thirds of the way to the end, that mystery cleared up. Poor Mikey.

Poor Raphie! But, totally pwned by Splinter.

As always, a wonderful bit of work!

Sneaky Turtle

OMIGOD! haha That was terrible, Raph! Yet so, so funny! And poor, gullible, trusting Mikey. He was so happy that Raph had helped him too!: “I’m gonna make another one to thank Raphie for helping me!”-- aww! Raph should be ashamed of himself, but I *know* he isn't. And I liked Raph's 'moral' the best! hehe

As usual, adorable & funny to pieces!

ROTFLOL! Priceless!

ROFL! Philosophical Raph is to die for! ^^

Twenty flips? Only twenty?! I reckon the little bugger got off lightly!

ROFLMAO! And here I thought I thought Raph was being really helpful and gave out the wrong kanji by mistake; why that little- xD;; but the idea of biting sensei's tail- Ouchies! (Hmm... I wonder if it tastes like chicken *shiftyeyes* )

And innocent Mikey, so cleuless to his dear brother's prank- probably a payback for something else, but who cares? xD; this gives me the impression that no matter how good Dona nd Leo can be, first person for Mike to turn to would be Raph regardless of how good (or bad) he might be at the stuff... that was, kinda sweet! ♥

XD That was great. I could totally see Raph doing that. Well done!