The story is awesome, that's probably the only word I could describe it with. :D Though I'm a bit confused on why you described Konan's hair as auburn when it's blue. But great story nonetheless! :)

I really liked this!

I've been meaning to say this, but Pein and Konan sure aren't... normal, in a sense. It must be a unique experience to write about them... or maybe a bit frustrating.

Haha.

But, you do a great job at portraying them, no OOCness detected here!

Uwaah

So amazing! There's really just nothing more or less. And as much as I love a good long read, short and sweet does the trick too. I'm happy that I get yet another add to the C2, and thank you so much for writing this! PeinBlue is LOVE. (sorry for the really short review, but I'm in Japan right now, and you won't believe how pricey the internet fee is...)

Lux,

Dreamz

I loved your story! It was very beautiful... (I know it sounds touchy, but that's just who I am.)

This story is made of win. I loved it.

just the best!