aw, that was so cute!

This is so cool! I just read this on deviantart a few days ago! It's so sweet though the grammer errors take a little away from it.

This is a great little ficlet that makes my inner Zutara happy, thank you for publishing it. Zuko was quite in-character, his unsurity and his actions were very believable and well-written.

I did pick up on a few grammatical errors and typos that I hope you won't mind me pointing out:
And finally, after half an hour of walking and searching, he had found himself before a death end.
-Isn't the phrase 'dead end'?

The sent of sea water was almost hard to ignore, not that he minded.
-The c in scent must have escaped

It did Zuko thinking of Katara in some way.
-The sentence doesn't make sense, I don't know what it's meant to say.

Even the cold did him thinking of her.
-Neither does this one

His eyes wandered over the three ivory earrings which were made of some sort of coral he had never seen before.
-If it's made of ivory how could it be made of coral? If it's the colour of ivory, maybe stipulated 'three ivory coloured'

He knew the merchant hadn’t even taken a few bronze coins of the prize, at least not by the looks of it.
-off, not of

The tears turned to steam at the contact and soon none were any more present on her face.
-the words 'any more' shouldn't be there, or should be at the end of the sentence. In their current position they don't make sense.

Good job, but you might want to have someone edit, or at least go over it and fix whatever mistakes you find. There were a few. jinxed

haha.
the old lady is a creper.
that was good, though it seemed a bit rushed at the end.