cant believe she just forgave them

can't wait to read the sequal

you should of put ll mio cantante it means my singer la tua cantante means your singer

this story is so good. you did a great job with it

this is really a good story so far, i am so glad that edward and bella are back together.

loved the story!

Ok, I'm going to be truly honest. I found this very cheesy and easy to figure out what will happen. Thats an honest opinion. You got everyone all worked up about her death and then she randomly wakes up from the 'power of love'. Sorry, it's just I found that very stupid, cheesy and not worth the ending it was...

Otherwise it was a very used plot that really didn't have much of a plot! No offense intended for anything but I thought telling you straight out would be the best.

Your writing style is not very good. Not utterly horrible but not great.

My tip would be to try and make sure the plot isn't so obvious and cheesy. Also editing is a big must for any story. So maybe try that out. It actually is very good for getting readers. :)

Good luck with future writing!

Faith, LU Concritter

for listening!

its chessy but good

jacob is mean can i thought they would have mention bellas name

y do they hav to wear skinny jeans y cant they b flare jeans

culo

loved the story!

ew i hate the name xavier

intresting...

That was so cool!

Jess-E