Slight grammatical errors but it was awesome!

ok so the plot is really nice and i enjoyed reading it. but for some reasons, i can't help but notice the problematic grammar in your story. but i understand that since you're writing in a different language, it could be quite challenging.. anyways, do your best! :)

review? of curz!

it's an odd, i think, that for now you still only had 3 reviews.
That's weird for such a great CloTi fluff.

But maybe it's better if the confession is about at least 3 days after Cloud defeat Sephiroth?
I mean, we know that Cloud is kinda shy.

Out of it, Great story!

wa akí vengo yo a dejar review en español X3~~

yay!!

me encantó

cortito pero muy lindo -aw el pairing tifa x cloud siempre me ha llamado mucho la atención y aww me llegó

gracias por el fic -aw

this is the first time you've written in a different language? IT WAS AMAZING!!

I read it! And I like it! It's so sweet~
I like Tifa's attitude, she let herself say everything she feel, sometimes I want to be more like Tifa.
And Cloud was so sweet~ Even when he didn't say a word, Tifa could read Cloud's feelings for her. I like that 'cause made me think in a connection between them. A special connection.
I like it a lot, Maki-chan.
You have to write more often xD

Bye~