Reviews for Cracks in the Armour
lemon-rind 4/9/13 . chapter 1
Thank you.
DarkHarlequin 10/2/12 . chapter 1
I loved this. Azula is my favourite character, and I loved how you portrayed her. It's heartbreaking, how fragile and lonely she really is.
AMP 6/27/10 . chapter 1
This is very good. I don't think I've ever read an Azula portrayal like this. But it is also the most like her. I commend you on this. Great work, girl.

-AMP
YfyF12 8/12/09 . chapter 1
aw great job! _

I like these Azula redemption kind of things, since I'm sure she had feelings as well.
appa-appa-away 4/24/09 . chapter 1
Awesome stuff. I liked it.

You captured Azula's dark side perfectly. Well done!

XD

AAA
Toph13139 1/3/09 . chapter 1
Wow.. I really liked this... It's nice to see that I'm not the only one who thinks Azula has... potential
Kuzon 11/14/08 . chapter 1
Fantastic, so effective in every way. This really tugs on the ol' heartstrings. Azula is definately my favourite character and you write her very well!
The One And Only Lobster 10/28/08 . chapter 1
Oh, Azula. D:

Brilliantly executed. I really loved this one. I think you are quite probably right.
wakingfire 8/30/08 . chapter 1
Love it. This is part of what I keep telling everybody-that Azula always had a worse life than Zuko ever had and that I truly pity her.

They always look at me as if I'm crazy but I'll continue to say so.
mak0-ch1 8/2/08 . chapter 1
I like your take on Azula's real thoughts and feelings...Book 3 revealed a lot about her more...'humane' side...and so I've lost all hatred towards her by the end of the series and was totally disappointed that they ended it with her looking pathetic and her future a question

so i'm really happy that you're making an 'Azula redemption' thing

'everyone picks Zuko over [Azula]'...not entirely true: While Mai picked Zuko, Ty Lee picked Mai - which by the way I think is more admirable, if only a little bit, than the former since it only took Ty Lee friendship to go against Azula, while it took Mai her love for Zuko

and I'm rambling about this because I'd like to read a story centered around Mai's and Ty Lee's friendship, preferably written by you..so if you have time or if you think it's worth writing about, could you write one about it? please and thank you
delicate.desires 7/22/08 . chapter 1
That was an amazing story! I really liked it.
intheinkpot 6/29/08 . chapter 1
Awesome! This was really, really good, seriously. I like how you portrayed Azula. It made her seem more human, without making her OOC. In my opinion, anyway. Defininatly faving this.
Liooness 6/26/08 . chapter 1
yay! a human azula! loved it. great job and azula is just such an awesome villian, but i love how human she still is
jaeriaxabielle 6/26/08 . chapter 1
it's really good. a nice twist to the azula cannon-version. i really like it! _
Anti-Logic 6/24/08 . chapter 1
That was great! I'm an Azula-redemption lover myself. ;) Or at least a lot of Azula angst.

I saw that you did something interesting with the phrases in parenthesis...I thought it was a mistake at first that nothing was capitalized, but then I realized that I really liked it. Very stream-of-consciousness.

On to read the next one.
23 | Page 1 2 Next »