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| Sue Peterson 2008-09-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat series, fun to read! Hope that there will be more chapters forthcoming (hint). I like the portrayal of Methos especially - good voice. |
| Dani 2008-09-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseLovely! I very much enjoyed your story; the plot was good, the characters well thought out, and the "tech" used wisely... A word of caution -- although Rodney is not a favorite of mine, he seems to be quite popular among others. I am looking forward to the next installment. |
| Carmsies 2008-09-01 ch 1, | abuseI loved this story. PLease continue it and post more soon. I can't wait to see what other tricks and pranks Methos will pull on Dr. McKay. Keep up the great job. |
| dhh 2008-08-13 ch 1, | abuseHey there, Not what I expected from this SHORT story of yours..I have to say, I loved 'BLP' eventhou it's STRAIGHT and I really, really didn't take to that one girl that Methos saved from dying. It just wasn't right and that whole part of your story, I HATED but other then that, it's a amazing story..It would've been better if it was Slash but YOU'RE a straight writer, which is a pity when it comes to this story becuz there isn't much quality, lengthy HL/Stargate crossover or HL/Crossover of any kind..Yours, along wit another is thy best that I've read.. As for this one, it really wasn't what i expected..I didn't expect YOU to make John a pre-Immortal...I really, really wished this story/chapter was better..More stuff going on, and more, of just everything..This has to be thy worst of a seqeul to 'BLP' becuz it was pretty boring.. You could've done more with 'BLP' if you wanted but you chose to end it...Pity! Sincerely, |
| klester 2008-08-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseIt is a unique piece of fanfiction. PLEASE continue |
| Wreath of Roses @->->--- 2008-07-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI have to say that I just finished reading the entire series up to this most recent addition; and I love it! I got hooked on SG/Highlander stories after reading the fantastic Ecolea's "Changing of the Guard." I have read several other stories both a Heliopolis and 7th Dimension, and your series and Ecolea's are the best that I have read! You have exciting, fast-paced story lines and despite being an AU your characters catch the flavor of the originals. O'Neil is delightfully irreverent, and Methos is his egmatic, snarky self. Great job. I look forward to reading more! |
| cjcold2 2008-07-11 ch 1, | abuseNice update. So glad to see more of this story. It has been a while, but that is okay, just means I get to go back to reread all of the series. Glad to see Methos with his trickster habits in play. I agree that he had to limit his interference. Would be nice to see the children and mothers come visit the Athosians. Maybe bring along some Watchers, learning about new cultures and all that rot. Maybe have Methos bring along some gifts for the visit, since they have to leave everything they couldn't move through the gate. Not high tech electronics but some simple tools, cloth, spices and other things that they might apprecicate without changing who they are. I can definitely see Methos bringing toys for the children. Maybe old style wooden toys and handcrafted things, not the plastic they make these days. Look forward to more of this and how Methos subtle interference can change things hopefully for the better. And maybe defalte Rodneys Ego regularly. More soon please. |
| klingbohne 2008-07-08 ch 1, | abuseHey. I'm happy you keep going and tie the two galaxies together. I love your stories and can't wait for more. Shepherd won't having it easy to give in to the new situation. And McKay will be a lot of fun too. |
| Lile Arresty 2008-06-29 ch 1, | abuseI'm so happy you continue your Best Laid Plans arc. I have been waiting some time for it. I like it, although it seems a little ... hurried? There is to little interaction between the characters. Most is just describing what Methos does. Not to sound ungrateful. I still like it very much. I found a 'tbc' at the end? Does that mean there is more? :) Hope so. |
| acer-sigma 2008-06-27 ch 1, | abuseWhat a treat to see this story come up. Interesting to see you tie the ancient gene into the immortals. Course this begs the question of whether or not Jack is a pre-immortal. Found it quite amusing to see Methos wandering around in the background observing and studying Atlantis and all its new inhabinants. Not suprising that he would latch onto McKay for amusement. Nice little warning about the Ori. Too bad Jack didn't catch it. Hope this means you might do a little something with the new SG-1. Somehow I suspect Methos would probably get along marvelously with Vala! Till next time! |
| jenetri 2008-06-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story! |
| nibbled 2008-06-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseI've waited so long! I'm glad you're still alive and writing. I can't wait to see what you'll do next. Ok, I realize I'm going to have to wait, but the number of hits is going to get because of it is ridiculously large. Your story continues to entertain me. What's Jack going to do when he realizes Methos's throw away command about the Ori was true? nibbled. |
| Cattibrie393 2008-06-25 ch 1, | abuseVery fun. Like the references put in about Silas and Caspian. And messing with everyone in his old man costume was very amusing and so in character. |
| Village-Mystic 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseVery cool. Always enjoy seeing more of your stories in this continuity. Thanks for sharing. |
| Morrolan 2008-06-23 ch 1, | abuseLove this. So happy to see that you wrote more for this series. Looking very muchly forward to the next bit. |