Yes, writing Yin is definitely a struggle. Especially when it comes to the way she thinks. But I think you nailed it, along with everything else in this fic.

I didn't even know it was possible to write these two so well, and still have some sort of... emotion. This was absolutely amazing.

Heh, I'd a say a pretty darn good story... It's a shame there is so little fanfiction for this series. :(

signed
Specter

i loved your story. great job!

:) Nice...

Yeah Hei, Teach her how to smile. :)
Cute Story!

Just beautiful... i love it. Thanks for the good time i sped reading it.