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Hesunohana
2009-11-13 . chapter 2
so well-written !! and enjoyable.

BRAVO !
devillish angel
2009-09-28 . chapter 2
i have relegiously followed your Milk Tea and Thirteen sugars series but i think this one still remains my fav. i hope u write more stories with the interaction between the brothers and zachary cause at the end i just love happy endings

thanks for the wonderful stories i adore all of them.
Shadowmaiden3
2009-04-13 . chapter 2
Thank you, thank you very much. You helped me figure out why so many people drop my story before even reading the first chapter through.
I have an OC based story that explains where Crusniks came from, and since Abel and Co aren't born yet, it's really difficult to bring them in to the plot...

Well, thank you again!

Your story was delightful to read, as always.

~Shadow
smcandy
2009-02-14 . chapter 1
I would lie to see when you do get around to it when int he story of your latest addition when will Cain be at the attendance of Zachary Kyrys Nightroad's birth and what not I wan tot see that story come about ASAP.

Good work once again and I have to add this to my favorites as well.
Donna della Penna
2008-08-23 . chapter 1
You're right...there's just something WRONG about Cain. Still, you have to feel a little for the guy when he tries to reconcile. But he's still messed up.

I must say that you perfectly portrayed Abel Nightroad. Sure, he's goofy and dense sometimes, but he's equally brooding and serious. The goofiness is a front, if anything, and it's good to see a balance between both aspects of his character.

I like what I'm reading, and I can't wait to read more of your work. =)
BloodHeron
2008-07-01 . chapter 2
Nice...

It actually answers quite a bit. I have problems writing child characters because, I suppose, I never was a child. I raised myself in a house full of grown-ups, learned much from my scientist great-grandparents, and was fairly isolated from other children my formative years. Something I guess I always knew, but it didn't smack me in the head until I read your explanation. So *that's* why my child characters have always been so deficient.

Thanks. This oughta clear up some murky mysteries for us idiots out there, especially us idiots whose kids tend towards adulthood at five. It's nice to see the insight you have. I look forward to reading more:)
Perhelediel
2008-06-26 . chapter 2
I so meant to comment on this earlier.

What a beautiful little future-fic. I really liked how Zachary behaved throughout, actually, it almost gave a little hint toward his upbringing--while he might be Abel's boy through and through, his stoic manner and innocent belief that 'someone is on his side' is all Esther, in my view. :D Also, great job developing a plotline that wasn't purely to get Abel and Esther together and pop out a kid--it was legitimate, well-thought-out, and EXTREMELY well-written, as always, my dear.

Along with fanart of Broken Wings (Isabel!), I will definitely be making some fanart of the Nightroad family and will send it your way. *hug*
BloodHeron
2008-06-25 . chapter 1
Bloody wonderful! And you managed to stay perfectly in little Zachary's head, which seems to be the most difficult thing for me to do. How do you think like a kid when you're not one anymore?

And you've got some great insight on the Crusnik...family. All of them. The Astha reference was hilarious too. Of course poor Zachary would be confused about the "pumpkin-head" comment.

Positively brilliant, all of it. Brilliant!
mlkoolc86
2008-06-24 . chapter 1
All I can say is i like and look forward to the next one
Twilight
2008-06-24 . chapter 1
I've read your other Trinity Blood and Castlevania stories and I have to say I'm a fan of your work.Though I have to wonder Would you ever write a story where Able and Alucard along with a living Maria meet.Well I hope so!Keep writing cause your stories are awesome!
Mrs.Masters
2008-06-24 . chapter 1
ZOMG AUNTIE ASTA, AUNTIE CATERINA, AUNTIE SETH, SO CUTE! This was a great series to read, and its definately one I plan to read again. I'll be watching for any additions, but this is just great! *love* A great many thanks for writing such a great story! Bravo!
ro-iro38
2008-06-23 . chapter 1
I love it! It's very well written, as always, and I can't wait to read the next installment in the series!
carcrashheart
2008-06-23 . chapter 1
Love, love, LOVE it! I love the fairy-tale style, like a warped children's book. I like Zachary, too. He's such a sweet, cute little kid. I love how he tries to be brave and all the detail about his Daddy. He really is his parents' son. Such a sweet story, yet I actually felt bad for Cain. This is a great story right here. Keep it up, please!
Lil-Rahl
2008-06-23 . chapter 1
Really cute! I absolutly love your stories! Keep up the great work! I've been waiting for like...EVEr (Well it seemed like forever) for you to continue your series. Can't wait for you next story.

Lil-Rahl

P.S I agree on the ordeal with Cain. I don't like those guys that smile after killing on of his minons for no reasons. Scary stuff.
Qualia Des
2008-06-23 . chapter 1
Yay! Another installment in your Milk Tea series!! Your stories are so very well-written, with just the right amount of plot and drama to balance out the fluff. Keep it up!

(Plus, you're practically the only thing keeping alive the AbelxEsther fandom. XD)
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