It's been a year and 2 months since this was last updated, I really wish someday the wish will be granted to me and others That it will get updated...So please update this is an amazing story and your style of writing will take you very far in life so please update this piece and dont just let Caspian just have his dreams I wwould really like to see them together in the flesh again.Awesome Work! ;~}
~Teerikca~

I really like this story so far! I hope to see more from it soon. I like Harken! Seems like a pleasant fellow. Yay for a little reunion this chapter. PLEASE continue soon!


DM

i hope you update sooner or later

Just found this story...Great work,as usual. Your Dark Caspian is amazing.

Now...more please? Pretty please?

loved it
its actually really unbearable reading about what susan and caspian are going through poor dearrs

The story was good, but confusing at some points for me. This is for all chapters before this one and this one. But over all, the whole was good.

hey rhion

this is my first time reading any prince caspian fanfic. i adore that movie to death, a bit disappointed on the ending though. still, your fanfic is interesting. have you read the entire series of chronicles of narnia? definitely points of interest.

happy new years!

hroyal

ps. im curious to know how often you update

all ready crying! Damn you why do you have to run my life?!?!
I should be mad that this fanfic has me begging for more *don't take that as naughty as it sounded* but I'm not! Great story so far, i know you hear that a lot but, you still need to hear it.

you have pounded my heart with you words to the point where it is glass now. I sware to you that i will be crying even more before this story is half over. You're an amazing writer.

Oh the angst of it! I do love this and I have only seen clips of the movie so far. This goes beyond the books, and that is saying something because I love the books, but your story really fleshes out Caspian and Susan, both of whom I think were neglected the care that was put into characterizing a few others. As someone who is apart from her husband right now, I can feel Caspian's pain. You truly captured what it is like to torture one's self with a great memory only to wake up and remember you're by yourself. I can't wait for their reunion.

i just read ur story and i love it! however i did notice that u haven't updated for a while... please please PLEASE don't give up on this story! i beg of you! lol... i wanna know wut happens... :D
can't wait to see wut u come up with!

When is Susan gonna meet caspian in REAL life?? geez I'm going nuts! nice story though

keeps getting better! love it!

OK. Here's an ego stroke. I just found this page (after googling to see if anyone out there had done any on Caspain. I'd just gotten home from seeing the movie for the fourth time-- I love our $1 theater.)
Interesting that in the dream they are in England. Caspian has no idea what England is like and it seems odd Susan would dream of the place she'd learned to hate while she's back in Narnia. Unless, the dream is a lie...
I find some of your typos so amusing. . .especially the one on the dream island where NotSusan was sitting straddling his "lips"?
I read this story while listening to the soundtrack from the movie. It fits well.
Well, good luck, go create and finish this!!

here comes the ego stroking! yay for you! hehehehe


really enjoying this, but as the (mostly) good little catholic girl i am, i tend to skate over some bits hehehe!


on the whole, good work...and bloody hell, let them find each other!