I love this song soo much, and when I saw the title, I had to read it. You didn't disappoint me at all, it's wonderful. I like the end the best, when (The walls fall down). Tres bienfait!

This is a really touching piece--the first scene in particular really got to me. It's like you've let us in on a really intimate moment between Rem and Sirius, dreaming about a future together and making each other happy even with the whole world not knowing. And to see that shattered in the second scene--heartbreaking. Well done.

I really love the song and it works perfectly here. I liked the beginning. Good job!
- Gaby

Wow, this is beautiful! Certainly answers the ever-present question, "what exactly *is* a wonderwall?", and you fit the lyrics in so well. I love that song, by the way. I liked the contrast between Sirius's pink lips and Remus's red ones, and the "** Harry" bit, and the interaction between Sirius and Remus, and I could go on but then I'd just be repeating the fic. Those lyrics always make my eyes well up...

Incredibly heartbreaking. I love the contrast of the two parts. I can definitely see this as a breaking point for Remus.
(I hate to think of Sirius leaving Remus behind...)

Hi Fray! :)

Well, I always start off my lengthy reviews with how the author made me feel- and goddammit you made me cry!

I was searching for a quick fic to R&R- Admonition will have to wait until I have had a bit of sleep (It's 12.57 am here!) so yes...

Like I said, it made me cry. It's wonderfully refreshing to see something this... real. It's not something you see evryday that Remus drops his guard, refuses and ginger newt and says "** Harry". ;) *drops professional manner* AND OMGWTF REMUS SAID "**"! *SQUE*

But it still made me cry. I love the lyrics at the end. The OCD is screaming "CENTER THE LYRCIS, CENTER THE LYRICS!" But we'll just ignore that, shall we?

Wonderful, Fray. I wish I had your talent. *is jealous*

Love, Ryerye

I love that song, for starters...

I love the idea here, especially since it goes much deeper - we know Albus' past, and that makes it so much more poignant, even though you haven't touched upon it.

Beautiful imagery too, although the line about Remus' red and swollen lips didn't make much sense towards the end.

Hello, Frayed!

Wonderwall is one of my favourite songs and you've used it in a special way.
I love Remus. I've always thought he deserves to be happy because he's really a hero. I think JKR have been too unfair with them, Sirius and Remus, due to she killed Lupin without any honour or feeling. Not even she didn't give a worthy burial to any of them.

I believe that Remus thought what you've written in this fic a lot of times. 'What's about me? I want to be happy!'. He suffered enough along his life, due to his wolf part and Sirius (although Rowling has said he was in love with Lily, I will always think his great love was Black).

This is a nice and moving fic so you're yet in my ff's!

Good luck,

FactionB.
(Sorry about my english, i'm spanish but I expect you can understand me ;)