M, can't wait to see what happens next!

Intriguing... Please, please continue! You've got me totally convinced this could happen. Everyone is so weel in character, especially Tai Lung, and I love the way you write. Cant,(but will have to, i supose) wait for an update :)

Woah! Did NOT see that coming!I really like where you're taking this. I love the drama of a good cliffhanger! Ya, I kno I've reviewed before, but please get the next chapter up! Please please please and thank you!

1st review! Love the story! I's not that often that you find such a well written tale here. But, I hate cliffhangers! Agh! So far, so good. As for pairings, i would reccomend a Taigress, or maybe have that evil cobra come around. I like the way you're taking the story,and I like how you use the ideas of sadness, trust, and acceptance in a whole new way. Two thumbs WAY up!

Not to be annoying... but update update update! lol

Seriously, though, I really love this story so far and look forward to more. If you need a sounding board or something feel free to PM me here or on DA(same name).

Hope you can get back into this work of art, XC. :) All the best.

So far, this looks pretty good. I have to say, I'm really intrigued by Nemean (Greek reference!) and his forces, especially Zuri and Vishnu. I've heard both of those names somewhere, I just can't place WHERE...Vishnu's the name of a god, right?

Anyway, I really hope you decide to continue this, because it IS quite well done. Characterization is perfect as well, so no complaints there either.

Nice job, and I hope to see it continued soon!

And you say /I've/ improved? When exactly did your descriptions become a thousand times more gorgeous? And your language a thousand times more moving?

"The young Tigress had wanted to grab her mother’s shoulders, to shake her and cry helplessly “Aren’t I enough for you? Aren’t I enough? Try, Mama, please, please try. Please try one more time.”"

"And all the logic in her world crumbled to pieces."

These lines stung. The first one made me a little teary.

Just go publish something so I can go buy it and give you money.

Oh, very nice! I have to admit, I was a little hesitant at reading a Kung Fu Panda fanfiction, but your writing prowess has easily overcome my doubts. :) The characterizations of all of them are very well done, and you've added wonderful depth to all of them. I really like all the names and the significance behind them.

All in all, a very good story, and I can't wait to see the next chapters!

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I love this story. That's pretty much all I have to say. Update soon.

Man, you're a talented author. You have such a way with words and the way you use it in your tale it just draws you in. Great stuff.

Amazing start. Definitely like your take on Tigress.

any chance you'll update soon?

This is brilliant! *FAV'd and alerted*
I just started reading through KFP fics, and you have beyond impressed me. I can't say I was expecting to find much of anything that would capture my interest, but I've been pleasantly surprised.
I love Tai Lung's character.. and exploring his chances of redemption, and just his feelings in general after the events of the movie, really appeals to me (and a lot of other people it seems!). I love that you haven't dumbed down this story to be silly, but that you so have a nice sense of humor that enhances what is so far a drama/adventure. I laughed out load when Po "hid" by falling into a bush! But it's the promise of more angst and action that really excites me. I love the turmoil you teased us with that's brewing behind Tai Lung's angry mask. I can't wait til you explore this more.. plus the romance and action you've suggested is coming. Tai Lung/Tigress are just perfect together.. I wonder if the writers realized that when they made these two..

Well I'm babbling now.. so please, please continue!

This is total awesomeness :D

Please write more, soon! Also, I only have one suggestion: more Monkey D: There was not enough characterization of him in the movie, I think.

Hm. Not enough Tai Lung, I'll say that.