Hey just thought i'de tell you incase you havent watched the series Lacus is his Girlfriend not his mother
and if u have watched it that is just idiotic

that was great :0 i like this story but atr the end you have two years later and well how is it that there daughter is three years old huh i mean it would have to be 4 years later cause well lacus should have been pregnant for 9 months then they would have to wait for 3 years for their kid to be 3 years old :) but i still like this story :)

I liked it! Though the ending was a bit cheesy. The story alltogether was good. Please keep up the good work.;)

First of all, I like your idea~ So please don't disappoint me with discontinued it, ne? :3
I think the opening izz a little awkward. I mean, Kira is lost his father and he seems alright? Is his father a bastard, or something like that? Beside, Lacus still izz a virgin? O o I'm really must read the next to know how the story will lead to.

Don't consider it as a heartless flame~ I just state my thoughts on what that should be up there~

I'm expecting more~ looking forward for your update~

take care?
¤ purachinae