Ah, sorry for reviewing again on another chapter but i feel I must congratulate you on actually making this futuristic world realistic! im glad you recognize the idea if you lived in the arctic then snow would be normal. if you lived in a rainforest trees would be normal. Its got a very waterwolrd ish sence to it (go google the film, its like the same setting as yours but instead of lava its water) and i really do love the thoughtfulness of it.

I also appreciate that your not treating the readers like idiots that need everything explained to them by the characters when something needs explaining, but if the reader thinks about it can easily work out for themself (which annoyingly breaks the fourth wall). Its awesome as i dont see that often. It really makes the story that more engaging and makes you understand the environment more :D Ive really been pulled into the lives of these lava dwellers and visualize the scenery so much more clearer.
Truly awesome dude! (sorry ive been reading old sonic comics)

And also that the locals will mostly be poor if there is little resource to trade. It would be lovely if this story had more paragraphing in it instead
of
lots
of sentence's ;D *wink* *wink* *nudge* *nudge*.

Holy Christ. is the reviews thing right? Only 3 reviews, seriously.. for 28 chapters?! Wow, im actually shocked. This story is one of the few ive come across whilst browsing lately thats actually good. I wish to italicize GOOD. Seriously, this is the first non romance, non spin the bottle, or high school or anything sonic story ive found in 3 days of looking at the recently updated.

I love this story, and i love its characters. Its a really interesting one, and although i haven't really played many new sonic games so i dont understand some characters i can happily read along. Please keep this amazing work up, this is happily filling my current sonic obsession up happily xD. *laugh* *thumbs up*

Ok, i was wrong about my hunch.

Eggman? Now i have a hunch on who those two hedgehogs could be.

I am pleasantly surprised, since this is a really good story!

You've captured the bleak desolation of this future really well; the fires, the poverty; it's great! And all the half-alluded-to hints of familiar things; the Prower name, ancient bases (which I'm going out on a limb and am assuming are Robotnik's); the STORY is ace.

What's letting you down is the presentation. Pretty much every sentence is it's own paragraph; there's some rather grating misspellings, and you should be more liberal with the commas, especially in dialogue where you want to give a sense of pauses and inflections.

This is a wonderful story, really; but the way it's laid out makes it arduous to read! All it needs is tidying up a little to make it more accessible. There's a gem of a tale here - it just wants a little polishing!

On top of all that; please update it soon! I'm dying to see if Blaze / Silver make an appearence. :)