Ooo, I really like this. I love the dynamic between Prime and Scavenger.

Armada Scavenger was puzzling to me, and this story helps me decipher his actions. Thanks.

I was so happy to find a new story by you. I really love this one - how all the little things come together, the whole process of learning and realizing in small steps we go with Optimus to understand Scavenger. And the last twist, whet the "but not yet" made me go all "what?"... Great!

The whole story just don't let one go till one has read it - and then re-read the most crucial thoughts!

Wonderfully written AND intelligent; you are a fantastic writer who knows how to get their story across. This is one of those stories that does such a great job of showing the reader who the characters are, it doesn't matter if its G1 or BW or any other TF segment. Excellent.

m, that was very well written and deep and... i suck at words today. I'll leave it at Kudos.