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| MydnightDreams-Seraphyne 2008-09-10 ch 1,  | abuseAwe... This makes me so sad. When reading the 'between the lines' type stories, the ones that tell about the time when the *real* stories don't, it's very easy to understand the loss that Peter and Susan have when faced with never returning to Narnia. |
| doobidoo123 2008-08-31 ch 1, | abuseyou can't lose your virginity a second time. |
| estelin 2008-08-29 ch 1, | abusethis was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. |
| AliThompson 2008-08-25 ch 1, | abusewow! for a story so short it was very hot and steamy and somehow very sad. you did an excellent job with this! the peter and susan pairing were written so beautifully and made u really fall in love with them. i can't believe they had a daughter and everything! it is sad that that all got taken away from them. you should definitely write more for them. there are not enough steamy stories about them. please write more! longer this time! lol..good luck in all that you do and God Bless! |
| thegreenwonder 2008-08-23 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed this. I enjoyed the progression of how their relationship developed into something else unexpected. The transformation had a feeling of slowness, even though it happened quickly. (Sorry, I am bad at explaining.) And... I loved that while reading this story, it felt REAL to me, even though the idea of incest is generally just plain wrong to me, the story made me forget about that -in a way that, I guess Narnia helped Peter and Susan forget about such a... deviance? And lastly, I'd like to say that I also enjoyed how smoothly your words flowed together. You write beautifully, and thank you for writing this. :) |
| fanta-faerie 2008-07-21 ch 1, | abuseThis was unexpectedly touching. Odd, but sweet, I suppose, in it's own way...I liked it. |
| californiagirl1426 2008-07-04 ch 1, | abuseWow, this was really good! |
| Lit by the Moon 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abuseThat has officially got to BE the BEST Susan/Peter story I have ever READ!! EVER!! It was so beautiul, and enchanting, and heartbreaking. I absolutely love the way you spun your words! They seemed to flow and ebb like lilting music! Thanx for such a sweet read. |
| RedMapleLeaf 2008-07-02 ch 1, | abusewow...that was rly 4bidden...luv it |
| xxxTrojan-Princessxxx 2008-06-25 ch 1, | abuseNice story! Well written and flows nicely. Keep up the good work! |
| jemmir 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseWell hello there. Are you the same person from LJ? http://aleathiels-fics./24628.html |
| VampireBassist 2008-06-23 ch 1, | abuseWow... That's pretty deep... Such a nice story. |