hm, I really liked this one...it was vague but still gave information that was necessary to gain a full understanding of what was going on.

Good job!

~Spirit

Wow. Just, wow.

I really liked this. The title, and that line, were striking. The pace of the story, going along with Specs' thoughts and jumping all over the place worked really well. I thought it was neat how you had a paragraph, and then a line of text and then another paragraph and you revealed the entire situation in an interesting way. I really did enjoy reading this.

I *am* curious about what Dutchy is going through, though, in regards to his moan and the break up. *muses* Ah well. Great job.

Miniola

good. i liked it