omgomgomgomgomomgomgomgomg I LOVE IT! WRITE MORE SOON PLZ!!

Keep writing this one its really good

No no!!
I know you can do it!!

dont stop writting ashokan farewell i love this story

I love the story! I wish you weren't about to delete it.

argh!

NO!

u cant leave us hanging there!

y is edward acting like rosalie?

no plese i need to read more upadate soon plese i want tp read more about daddy jazzy!

wa! XD
first, i'm really glad that you are well! YAY YOU!
and wa! XD
i love love this chapter!! Jasper being all father-like, how cute!! and Edward is being a jerk! HOW RUDE! Diana should teach him a lesson!! girl power! jejeje!! sorry, i'm a little hyper!!
jejeje!! XD

Great chapter update and i can not wait to read more of it so please update as soon as you can please.

Cool story, but your chapters are too short. Please update soon.

more more more more more more more more

Edward doesn't seem to be a very happy camper. :( Great chapter update soon

No! Well Crap. Darn it. Crap.

Well... Crap.

Sorry. I'm really hyper and can't think of much else to say.

DANG IT! Stupid blood test. Stupid pancreatitis or gastritis or whatever else it could be.

Hope you or she gets better SOON!

Well... CRAP! Complications are never fun. I hope its nothing bad. And everything just seemed to be going so well!! Dang it!

Bye CCgirl1410 :(

oh...yay!!
they're gonna see eachother again!
...I'm pretty sure tho. that when Jazzy left for the army he was like 17...so if D was 3 at the time, she was born when he was 14, which is...odd.
I may be wrong, and it really doesn't matter much.
xox.
Great story btw!!